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55. Waiting by ~nightowl96:iconnightowl96:

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Here For a While

here I stand
at the bus stop
waiting
                                                            though the busses won’t come this way for days
I am hoping
someone might stop
maybe a slow a bit
do something other than stare
confused
                                                                                                         why is she there?
I could start walking
but first I need a where
a place, a person, a thing
                                                                                       no, I am not playing charades
some reason to move
that’s right
I am waiting
for something to change
©2008-2009 ~nightowl96
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2nd of 100... not my best but i have never performed well when told what to write about.
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~1006:icon1006: Jan 31, 2008, 8:46:57 PM
did you take the 100 topics challenge?

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Drink if you can, and drink if you're able, but if you're drinking with me you'll be under the table.
~nightowl96:iconnightowl96: Jan 31, 2008, 11:17:59 PM
yes

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Exit stage left. turn right. keep walking.
~mdonut281:iconmdonut281: Feb 2, 2008, 4:17:14 PM
Is it just me or is this poem not only about buses... ;p I'm glad to see another poem structured this way, I enjoyed your previous one that was built like this.


Not to worry, your bus will come around soon enough. :hug:

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I seem to have forgotten how many memories and ghosts roam these halls.

Ghosts and memories, that is, of something that was once... the world.
~nightowl96:iconnightowl96: Feb 2, 2008, 4:24:20 PM
not really about busses at all....
actually nothing changes unless you do something about it...so i could be standing there forever for something to change

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Exit stage left. turn right. keep walking.
~InnocenceDivine:iconInnocenceDivine: Feb 12, 2008, 3:49:54 PM
This is really cool, I love it. Just... it's really well-written, I think, my favorite of yours I've seen so far. =)
~nightowl96:iconnightowl96: Feb 12, 2008, 5:24:29 PM
thanks

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Exit stage left. turn right. keep walking.
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